Good bye

April 28, 2011
Grandpa

The books you gave me
The odd things you say
The odd things you said
Love all around

But now you’re silent
Flame has taken you
On your body, tubes
Now you’re at peace, bye
Death claimed you.





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Aramis said...
Mar. 10, 2013 at 5:55 pm
This was really good. like, really good.
 
Mpbeanie said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 7:16 pm
Very well written. I came upon your poem in a forum and decided to rate/comment myself!
 
malatov2 replied...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 8:25 pm
thanks                 
 
StarwarsFreak95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 6:04 pm
No problem. I've lost someone and it was hard. I'm glad you shared your story, it can really help other people. Great job!
 
StarwarsFreak95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 3:15 pm
I don't think it stinks. Its actually really good and sweet. Thanks for sharing.
 
proudwobbly replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 1:28 pm
thank you.......................
 
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