March 21, 2011
Smile, perfect little rose.
Smile and fill the world with your beauty.
Smile, desert flower.
Smile for it shines like the sun.
Smile, flawless angel.
Smile because my world revolves around it.
Smile, pure perfection.
Smile for the ones who adore you.
Please smile.

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HannSawyer15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:37 am
This was sweet. I liked it! :) The only thing I would say is try not to use two different flowers, like try to find something else his/her smile is like. :) Great job!
JustineD said...
Jul. 31, 2011 at 2:33 pm

Haha, why does this seem to relate to my life? xD

This is such a sweet poem. Great work. 

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