Soar the Sea

Be at peace with me,

Here and always in this winter

Together.

Never worry about us,

I am here.

Sail to the end of the world.

Confide in a magic mirror.

Say hello to dead people for no man.

Always remember me.

I'll comfort you.

Mother, what have I done?

Giggle and pretend,

The human habit.

Much like a silent summer storm.

"Sister, stop the rain

And soar the sea," she said.

But I refuse.

I'll never leave you.





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xelawriter97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2011 at 2:19 pm
This is good except for the line in the beginning where it talks about "us" and then "i'm here". I got kinda confused. 
 
Lyllith replied...
May 30, 2011 at 7:33 pm

Thanks for your comments! And that part was like, don't worry about you and me. I'm here. You know?

 

 
nora55 replied...
May 31, 2011 at 10:44 pm
very well written 
 
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