Nobody Knows

April 12, 2011
By Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me


Nobody knows
Who I am
What I think
Or what I want to be

Nobody knows 
How I sleep at night
What I dream of
Or what I constantly see 

Nobody knows
Who I love
What I need
Or why I always disagree 

Nobody knows
Except for me
Everybody sees
The person I hate to be


The author's comments:
This is how I feel...exactly how I feel

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on Aug. 19 2011 at 9:15 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thank you :)

on Aug. 19 2011 at 8:42 pm
Raytheraym PLATINUM, Belton, Missouri
47 articles 35 photos 460 comments
Wow, this is really good! Great job!

msn9896 GOLD said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 2:32 pm
msn9896 GOLD, Billings, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
I have my own particular sorrows, loves, delights; and you have yours. But sorrow, gladness, yearning, hope, love, belong to all of us, in all times and in all places. Music is the only means whereby we feel these emotions in their universality. ~H.A. Overstreet

I like the fact that you didn't go into too much detail and kept it simple; it is what it is.  I can definitely relate to this :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:46 pm
Alcanno DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love life, don't waste time, for time is what life is
made up of."

-- Bruce Lee

I can relate to this one a lot. : \  Great flow and you broke it up well. I have one kinda like this called "Considering the lies" and another called "Looking in the Mirror" if you wanna check one of them out! Keep writing! :)

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:23 pm
ohmakemeover BRONZE, Centerville, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Touch comes before sight, before speech. It is the first language and the last, and it always tells the truth."- Margaret Atwood

This poem is really powerful, and it even made me a little sad.  I think all teens can relate to this in some way or another, and I think we all regret how people see us when they barely even know who we are.

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:31 am
FrownMonaLisa SILVER, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened

This is a very good poem. You conveyed your feelings in a creative way!

on Jul. 24 2011 at 9:17 pm
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk" -H.W. Hegel

"Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic' -Albus Dumbledore

Alot of people can relate to this...great poem!

on Jul. 24 2011 at 6:42 pm
yellowflower SILVER, Basking Ridge, New Jersey
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This poem really conveys your emotions about feeling like you are hiding your true self, I love how the words flow and the repetition of "nobody knows" it helps to convey your point! Great Job!

on Jul. 24 2011 at 1:59 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

i enjoy the repition in ways i can relate and in other ways i can't my fav part is" nobody knows how i sleep at night what I dream of or what o constantly see" good job

on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:54 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
15 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

Your writing is so relatable. You have a real gift.

on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:17 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

Yep, so true!

julian GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:50 am
julian GOLD, Eugene, Oregon
17 articles 17 photos 223 comments

Favorite Quote:
The goal is not about living forever, the goal is about creating something that can.

Wow, your poetry is amazing! You delve into the depths of human emotion with the expertise of true poet. Great work once again!


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