Lost Love

April 7, 2011
By sd846 BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
sd846 BRONZE, Flower Mound, Texas
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when i first saw her
i was blown away
i loved her personality
not just her face when i saw her

she didn't notice me
then i became a friend
i was like a bee
excited for honey

Guys liked her for her looks
i liked her for who she is
she has no idea how much i loved her
it was strong has the gravity from earth

I asked her out
but she said no
we are still friends
but i still love her

i heard she likes a jerk
i was disapointed
only if she knew what we could be
i would love her forever

she would be held every second of my life
i would make her happy when she became sad
but she said no
and it hurt like a explosion to the heart


The author's comments:
I wrote this about a girl i love but im one of her best friends and she likes someone else.

This is my first poem so please be easy on me

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