Purple Days

April 2, 2011
On purple days I feel serene
like a faint whisper
in the forest
saying calm
on a cool calm spring day





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MidnightFire said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 1:44 pm
I love how you described that, i definately have those days manly during the school year though
 
musicispassion replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 7:12 pm
haha i'm more relaxed at school then at home
 
Finchy said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 11:33 pm

Musicispassion,

Whether you intended it or not, your use of synestesia really makes this poem stand out. I not only love the categoriazation of a day by color, but then comparing it to a sound makes "Purple Days" very easy to identify with. Just by reading this poem, I figured out that today was a purple day. Keep up the good work.

Cheers

Finchy

 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:12 am
i don't want to sound stupid but what is synestesia
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:13 am
i don't want to sound stupiid but what is synestesia
 
WritingSpasms said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 3:09 pm
I like this one. It's more simple than the Yellow poem, but I love the reoccuring cat theme I'm picking up. :)
 
musicispassion replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:14 am
thnaksi like ur screen name
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 9:31 pm
This was a great, simple poem. I especially love the picture you chose to go along with it! :) Cats are definitely serene.
 
iheartu said...
May 13, 2011 at 9:00 pm
you are really impatient some times and conseded when you talk about your name but it is really awesome
 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 9:43 pm
um sorry thanks
 
musicispassion replied...
May 14, 2011 at 1:52 pm
i am impatienet and i love my name
 
iheartu replied...
May 15, 2011 at 9:23 pm
awwww its ok i love your name too and your impatience is funny
 
alex198 said...
May 11, 2011 at 1:30 pm
Once again short, simple and a great image. You have such a unique way of describing things, it's really interesting and it's what makes your poetry stand out and mean something. I really like it :)
 
musicispassion replied...
May 11, 2011 at 6:24 pm
thank you so much
 
musicispassion replied...
May 13, 2011 at 12:26 pm
please comment i love to hear feedback positive or negative
 
musicispassion said...
May 9, 2011 at 10:23 pm
anyone plz comment i love to hear feedback
 
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