Loveful Lust MAG

April 2, 2011
By asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost


Love is a funny thing
It can be a cruel game
Add -ed and it becomes what you were to me
Add -s and it is what
I still do to you
Add -r and it is the thing you were,
The thing that ended when we kissed
Farewell and good-bye
Love is funny sometimes
It delights us in messing with our minds



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 16 2014 at 9:00 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

very enjoyable to read. excellent word play in a very poetic and meaningful way.

KylieK GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2014 at 8:57 pm
KylieK GOLD, Mt. Washington, Kentucky
11 articles 0 photos 270 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love is to surpass one's self."

Nice job!  The ending was fantastic!

on Apr. 2 2012 at 6:50 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Love the play on words---it's true, love is a funny thing~

on Jan. 31 2012 at 8:26 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
1 article 0 photos 629 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Oh, now THIS is one that im gonna be thinking about for a little while. I absoluely love things like this, things that present a unique way of viewing the word. Great work, keep writing!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 12:10 pm
It was good!

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:49 pm
Addae Williams BRONZE, Irvington, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
Omg i thought this poem was amazing. Short and to the point which brought out its majestic meaning. This poem shows how something so short and sweet, can be so profound in it's own way. :)

Alb1125 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:39 pm
Alb1125 BRONZE, Bloomfield, New Jersey
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this poem was really creative and how the poet did the add-. the poet was really smart in identifying how the word love can mean many different things. Love this poems directness and gets straight to the point.

on May. 13 2011 at 10:26 am
alymarie3 PLATINUM, Leavenworth, Kansas
24 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Piglet: How do you spell love?
Pooh: You don't spell it, you feel it

that was really good how u had the add-...

goodjob


on May. 12 2011 at 2:31 pm
Dark_Angel95 PLATINUM, Hickman, Kentucky
25 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
A simple minded person can understand the most complicated things.

that was great!! def going as one of my favorites!

on May. 12 2011 at 12:46 pm
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, like you can't get hurt
Dance, like no one's watching
Live, like there's no tomorrow

I LOVE THIS!!!!! <3 AWESOMENESS

on May. 11 2011 at 9:20 pm
PixieDoll2698, Wood Dale, Illinois
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
too many people spend money they don't have on products they don't need to impress people they don't like- unknown

this is soo beautiful!

on May. 11 2011 at 10:42 am
JustADreamer95 PLATINUM, Fairfield, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If Love Conquers All Then Why Is The World In Constant Chaos?" -Me

This is beautiful, oh my gosh wow is all I can say. I know a lot of us can relate me personally I can relate to it.

on May. 11 2011 at 6:37 am
silentauthor SILVER, New Cumberland, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yes, I am A crime show nerd.

It is sad its like the forum that I started Roosc gave me a chance now has my heart.

vampier BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2011 at 7:54 am
vampier BRONZE, Glasgow, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"my favorite thang about eating gumybares is knowing that thay wont fight you back when you bite there heads off.......!!!!!"

that is sad i thank so.....!!!!


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