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Just a taste of that feeling

April 9, 2011
By Ana_Maria BRONZE, Laredo, Texas
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It's a feeling you cant describe
like a high thats never gone
your the one held liable
for this feeling I bottle inside
grey, worn out, and dull
I'm on the verge of giving up
it's like you know I'm almost done
you bring me back to life
I once more think your the one
but you only tease and once more your gone

© Jennifer B., Larchmont, NY

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Ana_Maria BRONZE said...
on May. 10 2011 at 1:23 pm
Ana_Maria BRONZE, Laredo, Texas
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thank you! (: im a begineer poet so any feedback really helps!
Coleyy GOLD said...
on May. 9 2011 at 9:24 pm
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We do not remember days, we remember moments.
Expect the unexpected.
Life will always through you curves. Just keep fouling them off. The right pitch will come. And when it does, be prepared to run the bases.

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this is well written and really relatable. great job! :)