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This Poem

This poem should be beautiful and mesmerizing.
This poem should express my undying love for you.
This poem should explain that, no matter what, I'll always be with you.
This poem should have meticulously chosen metaphors and similes, describing my feelings.
This poem should remain in your head even when I'm not there.
This poem should reflect all our good times together.
But it doesn't.




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IWillDream54 said...
May 5, 2011 at 1:54 pm:
Loved this! It was short, sweet and to the point. Keep it up!! :)
 
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DestineeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2011 at 12:19 am:
Nice! I liked the end. :)
 
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