This Poem

April 7, 2011
By Hollypaw18 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
Hollypaw18 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is different, it's the natural state- it's the facts, it's plain to see. The world's gray enough without making it worse. What we need is individuality!"
- Billy Elliot's "Expressing Yourself"


This poem should be beautiful and mesmerizing.
This poem should express my undying love for you.
This poem should explain that, no matter what, I'll always be with you.
This poem should have meticulously chosen metaphors and similes, describing my feelings.
This poem should remain in your head even when I'm not there.
This poem should reflect all our good times together.
But it doesn't.



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on May. 5 2011 at 1:54 pm
IWillDream54 GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Look out, they're coming after us with big guns,
They're only gonna tell you all the bad things I've done
Even if they words they say aren't true they've won,
Now I'm left here dying in the sun..."

Loved this! It was short, sweet and to the point. Keep it up!! :)

on May. 5 2011 at 12:19 am
Destinee BRONZE, Oakville, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Blegh. - Abraham Lincoln

Nice! I liked the end. :)


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