If I Die

April 2, 2011
By iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."


If I die
Remember me always
as the one

Who sat out on the dock
Holding your warm hand.
Like it was all I had in the world.

Talking in the faint starlight
in the wet grass.
My head on your shoulder.

Rember that
I hugged you
I hurt you
Rember that I loved
warm summer nights
running in the rain
staying up late
rap and country music
reading under the covers
Remember that I love you.



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on Feb. 13 2012 at 1:24 pm
Behind_a_Plastic_Smile GOLD, Roseville, California
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Favorite Quote:
"if you're not 1st you're last"

you can just feel the warmth and love in ur world, it just paints such a beautiful picture :)

iHannahJ GOLD said...
on May. 31 2011 at 11:31 am
iHannahJ GOLD, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
17 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I veiw myself on my intentions, the world veiws me on my actions."

thanks.I still love your poem more though.

 


on May. 30 2011 at 8:38 am
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

This is gorgeous! (: (Does that make sense? Can writing be gorgeous? Because if it can, this is). I really loved...

"Talking in the faint starlight

in the wet grass.

My head on your shoulder."

This was really very beautiful! (:



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