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If I die
Remember me always
as the one

Who sat out on the dock
Holding your warm hand.
Like it was all I had in the world.

Talking in the faint starlight
in the wet grass.
My head on your shoulder.

Rember that
I hugged you
I hurt you
Rember that I loved
warm summer nights
running in the rain
staying up late
rap and country music
reading under the covers
Remember that I love you.





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Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 1:24 pm
you can just feel the warmth and love in ur world, it just paints such a beautiful picture :)
 
JustAnotherOwl said...
May 30, 2011 at 8:38 am

This is gorgeous! (: (Does that make sense? Can writing be gorgeous? Because if it can, this is). I really loved...

"Talking in the faint starlight

in the wet grass.

My head on your shoulder."

This was really very beautiful! (:

 
baller4eva This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 31, 2011 at 11:31 am

thanks.I still love your poem more though.

 

 
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