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Smile

The smile you see is
held on by a
thread
And any moment it just might
tumble off
and reveal the waterfall
of tears I hide
that threaten
to cascade down my cheeks,
flowing emotion
and feelings
held back for
too long.



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Josika.Nav said...
Jul. 21, 2012 at 2:17 am
hey! i think you did a really good job :)i like the phrases you've used and sequence which the poem follows. great work and keep writing :D
 
JerseyGirl716 said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Wow, you did a really great job with this! Let me guess the song that inspired it: Tied Together With A Smile? :)
 
bieberl0ve15 said...
May 3, 2011 at 6:58 pm
ANYONE WHO READS THIS PLEASE COMMENT/RATE!! I WOULD LOVE YOUR FEEDBACK :)
 
writingcheetah7 replied...
May 11, 2011 at 2:08 pm
omg i LOVE this whole entire thing!! the word choice really shows the emotion. really powerful!! :)
 
bieberl0ve15 replied...
May 11, 2011 at 2:45 pm
aww thanks so much! :)
 
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