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I can see right through you
and your lies
that weave a complicated web
around your prey.
And I want so badly to
scream!
and unravel your trap
one deceit at a time
until you tumble down
from the pedestal
you think I see you on.



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flywithme899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 29, 2011 at 7:07 pm:
nice word choice in there :)
 
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bieberl0ve15 said...
May 3, 2011 at 6:57 pm:
ANYONE WHO READS THIS PLEASE COMMENT/RATE!! I WOULD APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACK :)
 
writingcheetah7 replied...
May 11, 2011 at 2:10 pm :
another really great one!!:) if you could check out my poem '3.1 Miles', I would really appreciate it!!
 
CrazyBeautifulLifee replied...
May 24, 2011 at 6:01 pm :
Willl do :)
 
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