If Only...

April 1, 2011
By Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes


I can see right through you
and your lies
that weave a complicated web
around your prey.
And I want so badly to
scream!
and unravel your trap
one deceit at a time
until you tumble down
from the pedestal
you think I see you on.


The author's comments:
I think every teenager has someone they feel like this about.

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on May. 29 2011 at 7:07 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

nice word choice in there :)

on May. 24 2011 at 6:01 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

Willl do :)

on May. 11 2011 at 2:10 pm
writingcheetah7 GOLD, Barr., Rhode Island
10 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is either a daring adventure or nothing."

another really great one!!:) if you could check out my poem '3.1 Miles', I would really appreciate it!!

on May. 3 2011 at 6:57 pm
Untouchable-Summer SILVER, Cranford, New Jersey
6 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the best fall down sometimes

ANYONE WHO READS THIS PLEASE COMMENT/RATE!! I WOULD APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACK :)




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