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blehh

i hate you
i love you
i miss you
i dont understand you
i dont know you
i want to jus kick you in the face then sit there and laugh.
wanna know the truth?
be gone. i dont want anything to do with you
i think..
for some reason you mean the world to me
but the world to me means hate, anger, and contrivercy.
sometimes i wanna run away from my feelings.
but i cant every where i go, they follow.
you are a big part of me. if you leave i woud have no one to talk too.
the empty spaces between my fingers are where your hands belong.
wish my life was like a movie, or maybe even a love song.
but ts all make believe. in your mind, just like a dream.
ready for my inception. some come and find me?




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NanaBaybee said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:37 am:
This is absolutley adorable ! I love this. Maybe you can use more words other than .. i this i that i this and that. Use some pronouns or change it up a bit. other than that its fantastic :) <3
 
confusedmuchxDThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2011 at 10:10 am :
yeah true, but I am just writing how i feel about a person. but i get your point. and thank you :)
 
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confusedmuchxDThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:23 am:
not supoose to be blehh i forgot to change the name :)
 
Sencere replied...
May 1, 2011 at 9:36 am :
the first part was funny
 
confusedmuchxDThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 2, 2011 at 10:04 am :
yeah i just wrote how i felt. and at that time i did just want to kick that person in the face! :)
 
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