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My metal heart holds the key to my past,

an eternity of memories,

of the summer we spent together,

happy and sad, laughter and tears.

My metal heart,

Memories of old make space for memories of new,

Of twilight nights, just me and you.

Dancing by the lake and laying on the beach,

When we were young and free.

You were my king and I was your queen,

and we danced through the night,

young and wild, happy and carefree.

Day turned into weeks and weeks into months,

and the summer of my life seemed to never end.

But nothing lasts forever,

and when the summer ended you seemed to forget about me,

and you drifted away from me,

but memories of that summer,

will always be safe,

locked up inside my metal heart.




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cowgirl4ever said...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 10:23 am:
This is well-written!!
 
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JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 10:32 am:
when I first heard "My Metal Heart"  I thought about a heart hardening from a bad breakup.  But it wasn't that way at all I love it!!!!!
 
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WiseGirl said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 10:42 pm:
I love it!
 
ams98 replied...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 12:03 pm :
thxxxx i really appreciate it:)))
 
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Raytheraym said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 9:27 pm:
Very good! Very deep and emotional. Great job!
 
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HannSawyer15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 8:17 pm:
I like it! I've never had a boyfriend over the summer but for some reason I can almost relate to you. lol Good job!
 
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gigi01 said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 10:44 pm:
This is very well written! It reminds me of the lock-shaped neclaces that are so popular to wear... great job!
 
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thetruthawaits94This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 9:53 pm:
i really liked this! it was a great story and like the metal heart thing. I'm picturing my heart as a locket inside my chest. :) I love poems that also tell a story and this one really told a great one. Wonderful job!
 
ams98 replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 9:17 am :
thx...that was exactly wat i was trying to get at wen i wrote this piece:)
 
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Robyn97 said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 11:52 am:
The metal heart idea was cool. Nice job with the occasional rhyming.
 
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redhairCatThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:38 pm:
Oh wow! This is so good! It could be a song! I LOVE this poem!
 
samiasaskia24 replied...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 7:23 pm :

Yeah! It would be cool as a song! Also, really liked the part

memories of old make space for memories of new,

twilight nights just me and you

!!!!!!! ;)

 
ams98 replied...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 12:05 pm :
thx:) this was one of my fav poems that i wrote:)))
 
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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 10:33 pm:
I absolutelly love it. I loved how it flowed and im tearing up because i can relate so much.
 
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kidmick98 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 6:33 pm:

Ally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this peom almost as much as I love YOU!!!!!!!

xoxoxMickey

P.S. My memoir got into the PRINT magazine!!!!!

 
ams98 replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 3:34 pm :

Aww Mickey i am soooooo proud of u!!!!!!!!!

I LUV U SOOO MUCH!!!

Ally:)

 
shoelessjoe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 9:48 pm :
wait a second... ALLY??!?!?!?!?!?
 
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