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A Broken Being

I look all around me
All I see is darkness.
Different shades of black
Slowly enclosing around me.
I look in the mirror
All I see is a hollow body.
Empty and Lonely.
No smiles,
No happiness,
No love,
No friendships...
A sad fragile mistake.
Full of lifeless breaths.
The significance of a misprint..
A broken being.




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Writerforlife7423 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 10:52 pm:
Great poem! I can totally relate. Everyone goes through this at one point in their lives! Good job on putting how you truly felt into detailed, descriptive words. 
 
SecrecyGirl15 replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 4:34 pm :
wow thank you so much! your comment ment a lot =)
 
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