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The Moon
It stares,
Its nest in the night sky,
Cold pale eyes,
In a never-ending gaze,
Seemingly unmoving,
Like a ship way out at sea,
It will drift,
Away,
Into the boundless horizon,
Only to be reborn at dusk,
With greater intensity,
Like a newborn phoenix,
Rising from its ashes,




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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 30 at 1:40 pm:
Hey there! I loved the title and the picture! Everything really ties in together. I am impressed for your first poem, this is really wonderful. The set-up was nice. You included some really great descriptions. Everything was crisp and clear. And while this is a simple concept about something that anyone can see, you made it your own as far as what you see when you look at the moon. I thought that this was really good. Great job! Bravo!
 
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SmileyFace13 said...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 5:26 pm:
I love this. it has great imagery specially since its your first poem. :)
 
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