Love Is Dead

March 14, 2011
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Love
An old fashioned belief
Simplistic views
Where boy meets girl
Destined to happily ever after
Romanticized from long ago
Stories of true love flourishing
Built up this four letter word
Adding to the terminal meaning
Betrayed though a test of time
Lost in between the pages
Translated false predictions
Deceived and cheated
Overused and overrated
Broken hearts
End to marriage
Happiness is not forever
Buried eight feet under the ground
Love is dead





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hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 7:35 pm
I Agree totally actually. I loved it as well. I loved your wording, how it flowed, everything! Astounding
 
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 9:54 pm
No, I don't think love is dead and I don't agree that love was absolutely perfect in "the good ol' days".  But your poem is excellent and you have good imagery.
 
darkwriternisi said...
May 21, 2011 at 11:03 pm
I haven't agreed more with a poem :) Beautiful
 
AudrianaB said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 10:58 pm

No critique.

It's perfect. Very nice job!

 
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