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how many times...

how many times...
have i seen you walk away?
how many times...
have i been left counting the days?
how many times...
will you make my soul break?
how many times...
will it take?
how many times...
will i give you a second chance?
how many times...
will we have a last dance?
how many times...
will i beg and plead?
how many times...
will you make my heart bleed?
how many times...
have you said 'i love you'?
and how many times...
was it really true?



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Debbie1 said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 8:15 pm
Luh-ving this poem! It's so touching, and so true! Great work
 
MusicSoul666 said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 5:58 pm
Lots Of Times ! 
 
cretalakaira This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:34 pm
good, but try to allude a little more. the ending needs some work, but i like it! keep writing
 
BeautifulSkye said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 11:38 am

this was beautiful and i can personally relate

 

 
LiveInTheMoment said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:17 pm
Wow, this is nice! I love how you used the ...'s. Beautiful poem, and keep on writing! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)
 
Taylor R. said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:27 pm
this is very deep and nice i likeit a lot
 
greyrferygbhfvsh said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:22 pm

Sorry dut you have to many

how many times sorry.

 
cretalakaira This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 12:33 pm
i agree with this, unfortunately.
 
fio786 replied...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 10:49 pm

i also agree

 

 
hikaru-nara-kheel replied...
May 4, 2011 at 5:24 pm
e point is to be repeditive
 
normgrl said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 7:13 am

Nice.

Liked your use of repetition. And it's very relatable. :)

 
TheBrokenAngel replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 10:36 am
This is a very beautiful poem, and I can relate so well to it. Keep up the good work.
 
normgrl replied...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 5:54 pm
yea I especially loved the last four lines...
 
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