how many times...

March 21, 2011
By hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
\"...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\" -Tomoko Katsu (my character)


how many times...
have i seen you walk away?
how many times...
have i been left counting the days?
how many times...
will you make my soul break?
how many times...
will it take?
how many times...
will i give you a second chance?
how many times...
will we have a last dance?
how many times...
will i beg and plead?
how many times...
will you make my heart bleed?
how many times...
have you said 'i love you'?
and how many times...
was it really true?

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on May. 4 2011 at 5:24 pm
hikaru-nara-kheel DIAMOND, Perkasie, Pennsylvania
78 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"...because we all know...magic does not work through the phone.\" -Tomoko Katsu (my character)

e point is to be repeditive

Debbie1 SILVER said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 8:15 pm
Debbie1 SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"As long as there is life, there is hope."

Luh-ving this poem! It's so touching, and so true! Great work

fio786 SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 10:49 pm
fio786 SILVER, Loves Park, Illinois
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i also agree

 


MusicSoul666 said...
on Apr. 17 2011 at 5:58 pm
MusicSoul666, New Haven, Connecticut
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Lots Of Times ! 

on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:34 pm
perpetuallydancing GOLD, Prairie Village, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't have any shadows, you're not standing in the light."
- Lady Gaga

good, but try to allude a little more. the ending needs some work, but i like it! keep writing

on Apr. 17 2011 at 12:33 pm
perpetuallydancing GOLD, Prairie Village, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't have any shadows, you're not standing in the light."
- Lady Gaga

i agree with this, unfortunately.

on Apr. 16 2011 at 11:38 am
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
you cant live with them... you cant live without them.

this was beautiful and i can personally relate

 


on Apr. 15 2011 at 9:17 pm
rubyrainstorm SILVER, Closter, New Jersey
7 articles 0 photos 275 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.
-Buddha.

Wow, this is nice! I love how you used the ...'s. Beautiful poem, and keep on writing! If you have time, please check out and comment on my poem, The Girl Inside. Thanks!!!! 8)

normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 5:54 pm
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

yea I especially loved the last four lines...

on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:27 pm
taylor rodriguez, New York, New York
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this is very deep and nice i likeit a lot

on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:22 pm

Sorry dut you have to many

how many times sorry.


on Apr. 15 2011 at 10:36 am
JustADreamer95 PLATINUM, Fairfield, Ohio
24 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If Love Conquers All Then Why Is The World In Constant Chaos?" -Me

This is a very beautiful poem, and I can relate so well to it. Keep up the good work.

normgrl GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 7:13 am
normgrl GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
13 articles 11 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do we eat to live or live to eat?

Nice.

Liked your use of repetition. And it's very relatable. :)



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