Broken glass

Without a heart
Without a soul
Lying on the the floor
Broken glass
Surrounding me
I'm feeling so cold
So close to death
He calls my name
I call your name
But it's to late
Broken glass
All around me
Why didn't you catch me?





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SammysBabyGirl said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 8:02 am
Thank you all for the feedback on my work! :)
 
brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 16, 2011 at 12:33 pm
very very good!
 
derky17 said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 4:31 pm
i love this poem so much, keep writing moore
 
musicprincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 4:21 pm
I love this :) I know you intended it to be about a girl who was pushed through a window, but I suppose if you wanted to, it could have even deeper metaphorical meanings too. Either way, this is fabulous!
 
sunshine101 said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 3:26 pm

I love it. <3

Simple, but very deep.

 
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