Broken glass

March 19, 2011
By Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
12 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a rose.


Without a heart
Without a soul
Lying on the the floor
Broken glass
Surrounding me
I'm feeling so cold
So close to death
He calls my name
I call your name
But it's to late
Broken glass
All around me
Why didn't you catch me?


The author's comments:
In this poem, the girl was shoved out the window by her boyfriend while they were fighting. It was accidental but he coulldn;t catch her in time.

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on Apr. 17 2011 at 8:02 am
Talia_Silverwolf GOLD, Dayton, Texas
12 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is like a rose.

Thank you all for the feedback on my work! :)

on Apr. 16 2011 at 12:33 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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very very good!

derky17 said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 4:31 pm
i love this poem so much, keep writing moore

on Apr. 13 2011 at 4:21 pm
musicprincess PLATINUM, Braselton, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
They say that love is forever, your forever is all that I need

I love this :) I know you intended it to be about a girl who was pushed through a window, but I suppose if you wanted to, it could have even deeper metaphorical meanings too. Either way, this is fabulous!

on Apr. 13 2011 at 3:26 pm
HaleyLynn101 SILVER, Leander, Texas
9 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Lyrics are the words to our hearts, that we are simply to afraid to speak.

I love it. <3

Simple, but very deep.



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