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Hopeless

March 7, 2011
By PK123 SILVER, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Don’t you see what’s happening?
We’re all falling apart.
No hope, no Dreams.
No way to rise up.
All melting down to the ground.
Nothing we can do about it.
Should we try it anyway?

© Erica P., Ocean Park, ME

The author's comments:
This poem reminds me how some people are so hopeless. And, there's no way for them to rise up. SO, I wanted to write about that.
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