March 27, 2011
By BrielleIsTheBomb SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
BrielleIsTheBomb SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Life may not be the party we hoped for, but while we're here we should dance" <3

You said farewell.

You said it in haste.

"So you won't brood over me."

I agonized over you.

You are like ketchup;

It will wipe off, but always leave a stain.

You stained my heart.

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 6:10 am
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I tihnk it could have been a bit better or maybe longer, but I loved the metaphor that you used! Good work and keep writing!

Check out my stuff sometime if you have a chance.


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