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Love is from the heart
but passion from the soul
We swoon together in this world
as we move as one in unity

Tears come from the eyes
but sadness from the soul
our feelings are in true form
in our souls

Our souls show are true feelings
no matter what they may be
compassion, sadness or heartbreak
the soul does not disagree




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musicprincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 10:18 am:
This is excellent work :) keep writing!
 
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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 8:34 pm:
wow! i loved this. couldn't do it better myself!
 
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abby_lynn said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 6:38 pm:
this is amazing if i could write like this i wouldnt have to work at this job of mine
 
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PoeticallyCorrect said...
Apr. 4, 2011 at 9:21 pm:

pain...from the soul

happ...from the soul

when we die bodies leave but our soul moves on

incarsirated till death do us part

its not easy to describe a soul.

 
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We.Are.Broken. said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 10:11 pm:
I think this is good but whats its meaning? What is it trying to say?
 
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4ever_and_always said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 9:08 pm:
I liked it, but i didn't really like the second stanza. I think you could make it flow better. By the way, when you said "our souls show are true feelings" did you mean "our souls show our true feelings"? I was confused.
 
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nickykensThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 8:12 pm:
I really like it.  The idea you had was good.  You seemed to kind of lose power as the poem went on, lose your drive.  Maybe if you revised it could be better. 
 
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Terrahantu said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 4:00 pm:

this is really good :)

 

 
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