The Soul

March 11, 2011
By erinem225 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
erinem225 BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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Love is from the heart
but passion from the soul
We swoon together in this world
as we move as one in unity

Tears come from the eyes
but sadness from the soul
our feelings are in true form
in our souls

Our souls show are true feelings
no matter what they may be
compassion, sadness or heartbreak
the soul does not disagree


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on Apr. 6 2011 at 10:18 am
musicprincess PLATINUM, Braselton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
They say that love is forever, your forever is all that I need

This is excellent work :) keep writing!

on Apr. 5 2011 at 8:34 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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wow! i loved this. couldn't do it better myself!

on Apr. 5 2011 at 6:38 pm
abby_lynn BRONZE, Salisbury, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
yesterday is behind you tomorrow will be a gift and today live like its your last day

this is amazing if i could write like this i wouldnt have to work at this job of mine

on Apr. 4 2011 at 9:21 pm
PoeticallyCorrect BRONZE, Ellenwood, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
im not lame 'cuz i aint cripple
u dont know me like i know me
i love you, no i just like you like you

pain...from the soul

happ...from the soul

when we die bodies leave but our soul moves on

incarsirated till death do us part

its not easy to describe a soul.


on Apr. 3 2011 at 10:11 pm
We.Are.Broken. BRONZE, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe and leave's before she is left" - Marilyn Monroe

I think this is good but whats its meaning? What is it trying to say?

on Apr. 2 2011 at 9:08 pm
4ever_and_always BRONZE, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
-Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decided to look beyond the imperfections. <3
-Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain. <3

I liked it, but i didn't really like the second stanza. I think you could make it flow better. By the way, when you said "our souls show are true feelings" did you mean "our souls show our true feelings"? I was confused.

on Apr. 2 2011 at 8:12 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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I really like it.  The idea you had was good.  You seemed to kind of lose power as the poem went on, lose your drive.  Maybe if you revised it could be better. 

on Apr. 2 2011 at 4:00 pm
Terrahantu BRONZE, Gillette, New Jersey
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this is really good :)

 





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