One, Two, Three, Four

March 4, 2011
By datrumpeter PLATINUM, Jefferson City, Missouri
datrumpeter PLATINUM, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
'Before you insult someone, walk a mile in their shoes. that way, when you insult them, you'll be a mile away from them and you'll have their shoes.'


One, two, three, four
Four sweet boys knocking at Love’s door
User, Player, Friend, Saver
All aiming for one single shot with her
User tried
She got tired when he lied
Player played
He ran away when she couldn’t be remade
Friend loved
She messed up, to him she shoved
Saver did as his name implied
And, even better, he’s never lied
He keeps on trying, keeps on saving
While all the others just keep misbehaving
He’ll never leave her, even with his heart spilt
He’s helped her get through all kinds of s***
Love sees this, and binds them together
With bonds only they can sever
She loves him so much, she never wants free
He’s all she’s ever wanted, and she the same for he
The sad truth of this little poem is
She’ll never be his
He won’t open his heart and truly see
The only person she could ever love….
Is he.



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on Apr. 14 2011 at 7:54 pm
datrumpeter PLATINUM, Jefferson City, Missouri
40 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Before you insult someone, walk a mile in their shoes. that way, when you insult them, you'll be a mile away from them and you'll have their shoes.'

thank you! its a poem based on my 4 boys- one guy used me, one guy was a player, one guy was my best friend, and the last saved me. thanks for the great feedback!

_Asap BRONZE said...
on Apr. 12 2011 at 1:53 pm
_Asap BRONZE, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
" The Only Thing That Comes To A Sleeping Man Is Dreams " - Tupac Shakur

OMGGGGGGGGGG !!! This Poem is Amazing :D Im in Love


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