No One Was There

March 11, 2011
No one was there


No one was there to bleed with her

No one was there to seal her heart

If anyone had been there to speak to her

She might not have been dead from the start



No one was there to cradle him

No one was there to say good bye

No one was there to tell him

In this world it's live or die



No one was there to kiss her

No one was there to listen to her tears

No one was there to tell her to be brave

And she still faced her greatest fears



No one was there to lose him

No one was there to smooth back his hair

He cried for mercy

And yet no one seemed to care



No one was there to tend to her grief

No one was there to ease her sorrows

No one was there to see her yesterday

Or to tell her there would be no more tomorrows



No one was there to say I love you

All they could do was stare

All they saw was nothing

Because no one was there





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hotchocolate said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 12:28 pm
this is actually amazing, how did you learn to  write that well? xxxx
 
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 5:02 pm
Now that's a compliment...and umm I guess all you have to do is love it. You have to love writing with every bit of your soul. You literally are just narrating your life and thinkin constantly of something that would sound great on paper. I found that just kind of loving it and not wanting to do anything but write and write, it makes you want to also write well. You have to be proud, and I guess it is the only thing I'm proud of. Although I have serious self confidence issues when it comes to my... (more »)
 
Risingsoul said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 7:14 pm
u were ten when u wrote this?? i love it, its really good!!
 
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 11:19 am
Thanks and yes I was...I checked the date through My Computer...I kind of just sighed and realized that I wasn't that surprised actually
 
CWells_521 said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 9:50 am
I really love this. My passions all revolve around me being morbid haha....so I can relate to this. Very good!!
 
SeasofSorrow replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 2:30 pm
Morbid people unite!!! Thanks for commenting, it means alot! :D
 
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