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Wild waves wash wearily
Over wasted waters.
Shores, once sandy
Sit sadly as the waves fall back and forth.
Gray sky above, horizon blocked
By looming black storm clouds
Waves wash over waters
Wild and blue no more.



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IntrepidRose This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:17 pm:
For such a young writer, you wrote well. I'm not sure I really like the alliteration. I think its a but much, but considering the age you were at, it was well written. At that age I hadn't even discovered how to write poetry yet.
 
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M_IML This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2011 at 9:54 pm:
The alliteration in this is great! I'm really impresses - 6th grade?? I love the image this poem paints.
 
Bgeek24 replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 6:47 pm :
This is a fantastic poem. It flowed together very nicely, almost like it rhymed, but it didn't! You are a very talented writer. Don't ever stop.
 
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