Landlocked Sunset

February 26, 2011
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Eyes close,
Cars breathe by.
Shore sighed,
Peaceful crashing.

Eyes close,
Boundless sheen.
Expanse of city light,
Restful sparkle.

G'night, sea.





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leafy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 7:11 pm
i thought this poem was well-written. keep up the good work!
 
BrightBurningCampeador This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 5:55 pm
I really like it, especially the last line where you say "g'night" instead of "goodnight". It adds character.
 
Raytheraym said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 3:29 pm
Very good! Great imagery! It's so peaceful and calm sounding. :)
 
TwinDemons said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 11:32 pm
Took me awhile to figure it out but I got it. I like this one!!!!! Although I dont really live in a place with big lights I could really see this. Good job!
 
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