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February 15, 2011
By Anonymous

As I watch you leave,
I find it hard to breathe.
No, this isn't how it was suppose to be.
If you're out chasing your dreams
tell me where does that leave me?
Is forever and always things
that people say?
Is it just things people say baby?

© Anonymous

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This article has 8 comments.

johnmayerlvr said...
on Apr. 15 2011 at 2:02 pm

Thank you! (:

 

and yeah.. it was kinda forced, i wrote most of it then finished it later... so the end is a little weak

 

Monkee63 SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 9:45 am
Monkee63 SILVER, Independence, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to feel my life while I'm in it"- Meryl Streep
"Live, Life Love"
"Everybody wants happiness, nobody wants pain, but you can't have a rainbow without a little rain."

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I really like this...although I think that they last line is great I think it could do without the word baby.
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2011 at 9:38 am
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awwww... this is goooooooooooood
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on Mar. 23 2011 at 11:02 am
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I really like this one. I can relate to this. lol
JJSchneider GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:30 pm
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Last line should be:

Why am I always the one to pay?

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i agree, this poem was wonderful but the last line does seem a bit forced.. i feel as though it just doesn't work with the rest of it. still beautiful though, keep up the good work.
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Great, if im not mistaken, its about some one (GUY) leaving his girlfriend to chase his dreams???
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I like this poem except the last line. It feels like you forced it out of you.