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By , Hot Springs Village, AR
As I watch you leave,
I find it hard to breathe.
No, this isn't how it was suppose to be.
If you're out chasing your dreams
tell me where does that leave me?
Is forever and always things
that people say?
Is it just things people say baby?





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johnmayerlvr said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 2:02 pm

Thank you! (:

 

and yeah.. it was kinda forced, i wrote most of it then finished it later... so the end is a little weak

 

 
Monkee63 said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 9:45 am
I really like this...although I think that they last line is great I think it could do without the word baby.
 
loser_like_me_xDThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 9:38 am
awwww... this is goooooooooooood
 
ForeverHeather said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 11:02 am
I really like this one. I can relate to this. lol
 
JJSchneider said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 7:30 pm

Last line should be:

Why am I always the one to pay?

Now that I've helped you...can you help me by reading my poems?

 
laaauren This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 12:29 pm
i agree, this poem was wonderful but the last line does seem a bit forced.. i feel as though it just doesn't work with the rest of it. still beautiful though, keep up the good work.
 
Bka341997 said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 11:03 am
Great, if im not mistaken, its about some one (GUY) leaving his girlfriend to chase his dreams???
 
Tiffanie_marieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 3:26 pm
I like this poem except the last line. It feels like you forced it out of you.
 
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