February 12, 2011
Tear jerked skies
Sleep deprived lullabies
The moons crest
A persons quest
The dogs howl
Night owl
Way and may
Come out to "play"
Pulling hair
Midnight air
Hear a whisper
Must have missed her
Bitten raw
Dead man's brawl
Eaten beaten
Shriek and cry
Last last kiss goodbye
Feel of lip
Dirty grip
Cold hard attraction?
Help me plea

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midnitewanderer said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 7:44 pm

I like the rhyming in this poem, it makes each line seem like it has a purpose; good word choice.  

Kind of confused about: "Come out to "play&quot" typo?

But I like the raw emotion displayed, it's dramatic and right to the point. It's simple but perfect.


lovebeatles18 replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 6:57 pm
i guess teenink doesn't like quotation marks :(
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