The War

February 11, 2011
By BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!


My brother came home from the war today,
I feel so sad,
He won’t talk to me,
My brother came home from the war today,
Each time I look at him I cry,
My brother came home from the war today,
He doesn’t react when I speak to him,
My brother came home from the war today,
As they lower him into the ground,
I look at him one last time,
And suddenly I feel angered and pained,
You see,
My brother came home from the war today.

The author's comments:
I didn't actually lose a sibling to the war but I’ve always felt the pain of others

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on Mar. 21 2011 at 1:40 pm
BlackMoonWhiteSky PLATINUM, Cedar Park, Texas
44 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thus is life, live it, or die trying!

Thank you, I'm glad to hear that you think that.

Alondra BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 11:12 pm
Alondra BRONZE, Edmonds, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back it was meant to be

This is beautiful, it really is


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