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A spinal cord straight through
A hip bone poked out or two
Perfect
The ribs are countable
A heart that's unstable
Perfect
An empty stomach
Tongue free from any lick
Perfect
Breasts sucked in
Not fat, only thin
Perfect
Heart always monitored
Can't stand without seeing stars
Mom's crying
Breath dying
Tube pumping food
Only a bad mood



.......Perfect?





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StarwarsFreak95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 22, 2011 at 8:03 pm
 This was great! I think that is completely new way to look at your body! You are such a great writer! I completely admire you!
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 26, 2011 at 2:51 pm
Thank you so much! It's really good to hear you say that. I find it really amazing that peopel are actually reading my writing but hearing things like that just about make my month.
 
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