Dream

February 3, 2011
By Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Life was like a moonless night
Shrouded in the stars
Beauty can be such a fright
But now you're in my arms,

You are my life now
Can't you see?
I'd cross oceans
I'd swim seas
To be with you
That's enough for me,

Your face is like a poison
Intoxicating me
How can we live forever?
When our love can never be.


The author's comments:
I really love this poem because it brings what you really want to hear.

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on Feb. 23 2012 at 9:37 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I'm so happy you really liked it so much, that really makes me so happy to hear. Hey I was wondering can you take a look at some of my other poems and my book to please. My book well I'm going to get it published soon. Thanks! :)

Imy_Spray GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:59 pm
Imy_Spray GOLD, North Shore City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
And the day came when the risk it took to remain tightly closed in the bud, was more painful than the risk it took to bloom.

Oh my god, this was amazing and beautiful and so touching... I was left breathless at the end. Quite surprised actually by the twist!

on Jan. 3 2012 at 5:03 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hey thanks for reading my poem and I hope you like the other ones as well. Thank You!!! :)

on Oct. 17 2011 at 11:42 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hey thanks so much for readying it. I will look at your stuff to and see whats there. I hope you like my book to maybe. Thank You!!! :)

on Oct. 12 2011 at 12:14 pm
SayuriKoizumi BRONZE, Somerton, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
I'm not a fighter, but I fight for what I love.

I love it! Its something deep and it means a lot and its true. Keep writing :)

on Sep. 30 2011 at 12:21 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Hey I put new poems on the web if you guys want to check them out. Thanks!! Oh ya I also put a book up there as well. :)

on Sep. 22 2011 at 9:39 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Ah thank you so much for reading my poem. Iv written more in case you want to read them. Thank You!! :)

on Sep. 21 2011 at 8:43 pm
LiederMadchen ELITE, Aurora, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
For, I could not love thee, Dear, so much,
Loved I not honour more.
-- Richard Lovelace, quoted often by Baroness Emmuska Orczy in The Scarlet Pimpernel

Oh, this is lovely! I particularly like the use of poison. :)

Riley_C GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 9:27 pm
Riley_C GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
16 articles 8 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is simply nothing worse than knowing how it ends." -Brendon Urie

This is really powerful, and the imagery is great!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:09 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I will read your poems and storys I promise you. And thanks so much for reading my poems to I hope you like the other ones also. Thanks!! :)

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:07 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much. And I hope you really like the other poems to thanks. :)

on Mar. 17 2011 at 10:06 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much. I hope you really like my other poems as well. Thanks!! :)

on Mar. 16 2011 at 11:41 am
Bren_Bren BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
If you stand for nothing you will fall for anything

Lolz you welcome

Kiba1 GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2011 at 5:54 pm
Kiba1 GOLD, Cripple Creek C.O, Colorado
12 articles 5 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"Its Not Too Late Its Never too Late.\" \" \'I Cant\' Is Never True\" \"Ill Be The First To Say that Now Im O.K\" \"You Tried To Bring me Down, And You Epicly Failed.\" "Judge me, And I'll Prove you Wrong. Say I'm Nothing? Watch Me Soar."

yeah, can you for me too? i have 5 poems i think, and 3 stories, soon im putting my atobiography... id like you to read them plese, and tell me what you think.

anaisp15 GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 8:33 am
anaisp15 GOLD, Batavia, Illinois
15 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
And in the music we find ourself

AWESOME POEM keep it up

Adeola said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 7:55 am
Adeola, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Women who aspire to be equal to men lack ambition.

This is lovely :) you are very talented

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:31 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much for reading my poem and I really hope you like the others maybe. :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:29 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Thank you so much for reading my poem that really makes me so happy to hear. :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:28 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
Im so happy you like my poem a whole lot. Thank you so much and I hope you like my other poems as well maybe. :)

on Mar. 11 2011 at 2:27 pm
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
8 articles 0 photos 136 comments
I promise I will read your poem today and tell you what I think. And thanks so much for sayin something on my poem it makes me so happy to hear. :)




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