Dream

February 3, 2011
Life was like a moonless night
Shrouded in the stars
Beauty can be such a fright
But now you're in my arms,

You are my life now
Can't you see?
I'd cross oceans
I'd swim seas
To be with you
That's enough for me,

Your face is like a poison
Intoxicating me
How can we live forever?
When our love can never be.





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Imy_Spray said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:59 pm
Oh my god, this was amazing and beautiful and so touching... I was left breathless at the end. Quite surprised actually by the twist!
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 9:37 am
I'm so happy you really liked it so much, that really makes me so happy to hear. Hey I was wondering can you take a look at some of my other poems and my book to please. My book well I'm going to get it published soon. Thanks! :)
 
Mermaidmissy said...
Oct. 17, 2011 at 11:42 am
Hey thanks so much for readying it. I will look at your stuff to and see whats there. I hope you like my book to maybe. Thank You!!! :)
 
OsumiKyato said...
Oct. 12, 2011 at 12:14 pm
I love it! Its something deep and it means a lot and its true. Keep writing :)
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 5:03 pm
Hey thanks for reading my poem and I hope you like the other ones as well. Thank You!!! :)
 
Mermaidmissy said...
Sept. 30, 2011 at 12:21 pm
Hey I put new poems on the web if you guys want to check them out. Thanks!! Oh ya I also put a book up there as well. :)
 
Mermaidmissy said...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 9:39 am
Ah thank you so much for reading my poem. Iv written more in case you want to read them. Thank You!! :)
 
LiederMadchen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 8:43 pm
Oh, this is lovely! I particularly like the use of poison. :)
 
bluebunny said...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 9:27 pm
This is really powerful, and the imagery is great!
 
Anpet32 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 8:33 am
AWESOME POEM keep it up
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 10:06 am
Thank you so much. I hope you really like my other poems as well. Thanks!! :)
 
Adeola said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 7:55 am
This is lovely :) you are very talented
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 10:07 am
Thank you so much. And I hope you really like the other poems to thanks. :)
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 12:46 pm
That was great! Keep up the good work!!:)
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:28 pm
Im so happy you like my poem a whole lot. Thank you so much and I hope you like my other poems as well maybe. :)
 
Bren_Bren said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:48 pm
I love it!! I like how you used some similes in the too...... can you read my poem and tell me what you think?? I just started Lolz
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 2:27 pm
I promise I will read your poem today and tell you what I think. And thanks so much for sayin something on my poem it makes me so happy to hear. :)
 
Kiba1 replied...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 5:54 pm
yeah, can you for me too? i have 5 poems i think, and 3 stories, soon im putting my atobiography... id like you to read them plese, and tell me what you think.
 
Bren_Bren replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 11:41 am
Lolz you welcome
 
Mermaidmissy replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 10:09 am
I will read your poems and storys I promise you. And thanks so much for reading my poems to I hope you like the other ones also. Thanks!! :)
 
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