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an immortals eyes

February 18, 2011
By brooky213 SILVER, Rogers, Arkansas
brooky213 SILVER, Rogers, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
"i have often regretted my speech, but never my silence."


she looks so innocent
until you see her eyes
sweet as an infant
until the next one dies
put the gun in my mouth
there is no going back
there is something trivial i seem to lack
with her hair so lucious
her smile sweet
everytime i look at her my heart skips a beat.
her body so perfect
her voice seductive
i walk to her, my mind reluctant.
with her chin tipped in a haughty glance
i feel so happy
my soul wants to dance.
i step up closer
then almost die,
i see myself in an immortals eyes.

The author's comments:
this poem is kind of hard to understand. the theme of it was the girl is seeing herself.

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