February 14, 2011
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This torrid place,
Incessant burn—
Long for cessation.

Climbing a tor
To reach fortitude,
I am azygous—alone.

Who be sufficient
To cool my pain
Without demur?

Pedant, I am
End up suff’ring teen
And disparage myself.

Cessation not given,
Not taken;
Yet perseverance granted.

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cookiegirl said...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 4:57 am
Wow. You're vocab is amazing:) Great work.
P03tryPunk said...
Apr. 25, 2011 at 10:09 pm
I like the poem but couldn't understand it 1st time i read it lol...i had 2 go look up all those pretty vocab words lol thank you for enhancing my vocabulary lol and great work as always!!
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 10:48 pm
This is really good! I like your writing style. You have a really nice vocabulary too, I might add. I keep rereading the line "Who be sufficient." I can't decide how I feel about it. Other than that, this is amazing. Nice job :)
Basketball23 said...
Mar. 11, 2011 at 7:24 am
I love the use of words in this, it gives it such a suffering feel.
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