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Fluorescence in the Dark

When concluding upon the end of twilight,
It is one song that I am left to sing
And be one vocalist, I inhale the dusk
New England wonders freeing my soul of mourning
With the physique of its nature, mountain so tall
I gasp of all inception of reality,
And standing among the dirt pathway to love,
It is you for whom I thank of freeing my mentality.
My dear savior, I write to you now, exposing the contours of my soul
And be one miraculous voyager,
It is among my journey that you have made me whole.
And though the stars shall twinkle, with never recognition of what gravity you defied
It was not your presence that constructed this earthly palace, as it was based upon the perception of your eyes
With all intention, it is you for whom I thank, each day of mine a spark
Far from our universe, you sing from another place
Like fluorescence in the dark.




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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:20 pm:
This is pretty good, your use of words is clever and meaningful.
 
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PerfectMGymnast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 1:22 am:
Another beautiful poem!! you truly captured the emotion through words!! i love it! :)
 
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TimekeeperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 1:48 pm:
I like it, it's emotional and you really do a good job of capturing the visual ideas in your word choice!
 
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