I won't need to dream anymore

February 14, 2011
By Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me


When i was younger
I used to dream
Dream of big things
Bigger than what i could be

When i was younger
I used to believe
Believe in what i couldn't see
Believing in what i could be

When i am older
I will dream
Dream of the stars in the sky
Dream of the greek Gods

When i am older
I will believe
Believe in the power of love
Believe in the gift of life

When i am old
I won't dream
I won't believe
I will see
what my life has been
i won't need to dream
i won't need to wish
everything i wished for
will have come true
i will have lived a life
full of dreaming and believing
i won't need to dream anymore



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on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:25 pm
blitsnik SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"If you must mount the gallows, give a coin to the headman, a jest to the crowd, and meet the drop with a smile on your lips."

Haha yes that is exactly what got me really into it. and i can see why you would want that. Every dream fulfilled would be...beyond great.

 


on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:43 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks! and well i love greek mythology aswel! i really only got into it because of percy jackson! ( i pressume you've read them or you should!) and well the last verse is just kind of what i'm hoping for :)

on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:40 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

thanks so much!you've no idea of how much that means to me! :)

ams98 said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 6:02 pm
ams98, Brighton, Michigan
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that was amazing:) i absolutely love it and am adding it to my favorites right now:) It was beautiful.....great job:)

on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:14 am
blitsnik SILVER, Palm Bay, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you must mount the gallows, give a coin to the headman, a jest to the crowd, and meet the drop with a smile on your lips."

Awesome! And mentioning the Greek gods was beyond great, im a lover of Greek mythology. It was good hwow you went from child to adult, but in my opinion, even as an adult with everything you wanted as a child, you would still need to dream. otherwise you could go stagnant for want of nothing. at least, this is what i believe. Great job though!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 5:30 pm
ohmakemeover BRONZE, Centerville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Touch comes before sight, before speech. It is the first language and the last, and it always tells the truth."- Margaret Atwood

This is so optimistic!  My poetry always seems to take the grim road of life, but this one is filled with hope.

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 11:52 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Fun how you moved through different stages of life. You're really good.

Vicky11 SILVER said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 6:53 am
Vicky11 SILVER, Charlottenlund, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The wisest men follow their own direction - Euripides

made me smile :-) quite inspiring

on Jul. 24 2011 at 2:01 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

my fav part was when u were talking about being old this is a great poem

on Jul. 23 2011 at 7:57 pm
freeflow23 GOLD, Durham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Saul saw Goliath as too big to kill. David saw he was too big to miss.
W.W.J.D.

Very inspiring! I like how you progressed from younger to old.

on Jul. 23 2011 at 3:26 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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A little repititive, but nice flow!




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