A new beginning This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Today is a new beginning.
Dawn told me this once
As the glow of the rising sun grew closer
The dancing stars faded
When I felt like giving up,
The morning air reminded me that today is a new day,
The sky took me on a journey farther than the clouds and
Night taught me to never give up.
Because tomorrow is a new day.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






Join the Discussion

This article has 7 comments. Post your own now!

Kat127 said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 7:06 pm
I loved how optimistic the poem was. I really love the personification in the line "The dancing stars faded." Great job!
 
leolewis said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 8:04 pm
This has sweet imagery, really positive too. I really enjoyed this.
 
leaves-fall-in-Autumn said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:14 pm
awesome, so pretty. I love the personification.
 
otherpoet said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 8:47 pm
This is a sweet poem. It flows thoughtfully and freely. Great job!
 
Lauren C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 2:43 pm
Yeah, this was great. Very simple and pure. Nicely done. :)
 
jas713 said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 2:49 pm
I can really sense the hope in this and the wish for a better tomorrow. I love it!
 
FrancesZ replied...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 10:07 am
Lovely, quietly insightful
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback