A new beginning MAG

February 9, 2011
By Jasmine1782 SILVER, Ida Grove, Iowa
Jasmine1782 SILVER, Ida Grove, Iowa
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Today is a new beginning.
Dawn told me this once
As the glow of the rising sun grew closer
The dancing stars faded
When I felt like giving up,
The morning air reminded me that today is a new day,
The sky took me on a journey farther than the clouds and
Night taught me to never give up.
Because tomorrow is a new day.



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Kat127 SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 7:06 pm
Kat127 SILVER, East Northport, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to let people go, in order to realize how much you love them"

I loved how optimistic the poem was. I really love the personification in the line "The dancing stars faded." Great job!

leolewis said...
on Feb. 7 2012 at 8:04 pm
leolewis, Bedford, Indiana
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This has sweet imagery, really positive too. I really enjoyed this.

on Feb. 6 2012 at 9:14 pm
leaves-fall-in-Autumn SILVER, Terry, Mississippi
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awesome, so pretty. I love the personification.

on Feb. 6 2012 at 8:47 pm
otherpoet SILVER, Wayland, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone." - Audrey Hepburn

This is a sweet poem. It flows thoughtfully and freely. Great job!

on Feb. 6 2012 at 2:43 pm
radicalchickster DIAMOND, Jericho, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Never, ever, ever give up."

Yeah, this was great. Very simple and pure. Nicely done. :)

on Nov. 20 2011 at 10:07 am
FrancesZ BRONZE, Glasgow,
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Favorite Quote:
"La stristesse durera toujours"

Lovely, quietly insightful

jas713 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 2:49 pm
jas713 BRONZE, Parlin, New Jersey
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I can really sense the hope in this and the wish for a better tomorrow. I love it!




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