Running into the stars

February 13, 2011
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angry words
twisted frowns
a lonely child watches from afar
her wet eyes implore silently
as she sinks
slowly but surely
into the ground
taken by despair
and she is gone.
Her face upturned
in final moments
to winking stars
why couldnt she be among them? dancing, shining, happy
but too far to be hurt.





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poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:36 pm
You go into a certain depth very few people go into......its wonderful :D
 
shades_of_gray64 replied...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:40 pm
i've always seen my poems as rather simple. They're really just my emotions, all poured out into words. I didn't mean to put any "depth" into it.. it just happened, i  guess.
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:35 pm
Most poems lack connection....yours has it all :D
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:34 pm
Give yourself a pat on the back for being an accomplished poem writer...look forward to seeing short stories on here ;)
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:33 pm

You read this poem....and...

give it a round of applause

encore

encore

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:32 pm
See! I can't ever run out of things to say about this...EPIC poem :D
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:32 pm

I read this poem and go like:

why can't i have talent like this?

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:31 pm

Not just good.......

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT :D

wait....actually not that either.....

REALLY GOOOOOOD

actually....

REALLY GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT :D

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:30 pm

Should i say anything about this awesome poem?

yeah......its the best :D

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:29 pm
Talent, right here :D
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:29 pm
GOT TO SAY...this is more than just words, but a poem that totally took off :D good job :D
 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:28 pm

SEE PEOPLE???

THIS IS HOW GOOD IT IS!!!! :D

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:28 pm

AMAZINGNESS!!!

AMAZING POEM WRITER RIGHT HERE!!!!

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:27 pm

WOW

WOW

WOW

WOW

WOW

WOW

WOW

 
poisonivy said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 11:14 pm
What can i say? Another amazing poem by the same talented writer :D Good job :D
 
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