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Forever

Your eyes
Forever innocent and pure
Your hands
Firm but forever gentle
Your hair
Silky and smooth
Your lips
So sweet and tasty
Oh how I love you
You are my everything
I will always be yours
Forever



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jajil said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 10:47 pm
very good its sweet
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:33 pm
So pretty and simple!!! I love love poems, especially the really simple ones, they manage to so beautifully reach the core of caring. <3
 
soaring_creativity replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:39 pm
Thank you so much :)
 
lil reeses 1015 said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 9:07 am
love this poem!!  who is it about...
 
soaring_creativity replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:19 pm
It's about someone special ♥
 
SecrecyGirl15 said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 11:50 am
short simple and to the point great job =)
 
Leah P. said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 9:42 am
Love is a beautiful thing to write about, good work.
 
M.Kimmi said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 7:33 pm
So DIRECT AND FULL FO PASSION!!!!!! THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!! :D
 
mcnwritingsoul said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:26 pm
Great image-implied!! luv it!! it had little power, though. i felt empty and still hungry after i read it. but very very good!! can someone pllzzzzz comment on my poetry!!!!! im desperate for honest feedback!!!
 
M.Kimmi replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 7:34 pm
sure, give me a title name
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:36 pm
Among Glass Now I Walk is a really good one of hers, and if you want to read some more of mcnwritingsoul's work, just try copy and pasting her screen name into advanced search on Teenink.
 
KiTTYKAT said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 12:01 pm
i love your poem it so full of love and passion
 
TheyCallMeSpanky replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 12:19 pm
This is really good.
 
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