Forever

Your eyes
Forever innocent and pure
Your hands
Firm but forever gentle
Your hair
Silky and smooth
Your lips
So sweet and tasty
Oh how I love you
You are my everything
I will always be yours
Forever

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jajil said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 10:47 pm:

very good its sweet

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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:33 pm:

So pretty and simple!!! I love love poems, especially the really simple ones, they manage to so beautifully reach the core of caring. <3

soaring_creativity replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:39 pm :

Thank you so much :)

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lil reeses 1015 said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 9:07 am:

love this poem!! who is it about...

soaring_creativity replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:19 pm :

It's about someone special ♥

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SecrecyGirl15 said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 11:50 am:

short simple and to the point great job =)

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Leah P. said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 9:42 am:

Love is a beautiful thing to write about, good work.

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M.Kimmi said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 7:33 pm:

So DIRECT AND FULL FO PASSION!!!!!! THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!! :D

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mcnwritingsoul said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 3:26 pm:

Great image-implied!! luv it!! it had little power, though. i felt empty and still hungry after i read it. but very very good!! can someone pllzzzzz comment on my poetry!!!!! im desperate for honest feedback!!!

M.Kimmi replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 7:34 pm :

sure, give me a title name

IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 5:36 pm :

Among Glass Now I Walk is a really good one of hers, and if you want to read some more of mcnwritingsoul's work, just try copy and pasting her screen name into advanced search on Teenink.

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KiTTYKAT said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 12:01 pm:

i love your poem it so full of love and passion

TheyCallMeSpanky replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 12:19 pm :

This is really good.