Your Mistake

February 7, 2011
By angelicashively GOLD, 06516, Connecticut
angelicashively GOLD, 06516, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
\"You\'re above this, you know it, God\'s on your side so show it\" -Angelica Shively


I acted on impulse,
I didn't think it through,
I said I was sorry,
I said I love you.

But you acted so cold,
So unforgiving,
I took your goodbye,
And walked away shaking.

The author's comments:
Oh, how love makes us feel so great at one moment but so broken the next.

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on Mar. 2 2011 at 8:24 pm
ArinellWingheart GOLD, Boulder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't think I can change the world, but I'll give everything I have to make the world change itself."

That's good to hear! haha :)

on Mar. 2 2011 at 8:21 pm
angelicashively GOLD, 06516, Connecticut
11 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
\"You\'re above this, you know it, God\'s on your side so show it\" -Angelica Shively

thank you for the feedback and I plan on writing for a long long time :)

on Mar. 2 2011 at 7:56 pm
ArinellWingheart GOLD, Boulder, Colorado
14 articles 5 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't think I can change the world, but I'll give everything I have to make the world change itself."

So Beautiful and so sad at the same time. Keep writing!


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