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May 15
3:34 pm
That little candy store
At the mall

I turn and abruptly
The world is frozen
In crystal time
Laced together
so delicately
Like a seamless snowflake

It lasts a whole hour
Or a second
I can’t tell

Yet all I see
Are bluish green eyes
Shaggy sandy-brown hair
Skinny jeans
Like the skater boys wear

I can’t see anymore
My blindness is perpetual
If love at first sight exists,

Then
this
is
surely
it.



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MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILoveYouThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 9:46 am:
Your work is very... Captivating. 
 
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