February 3, 2011
Harmless – the Children play
Laughter, and Smiles –
The Children – unknowing
Of Life – all around Them

One – always alone –
Picking at the Sand –
Secluded – the rest ignore
The One left alone

Freak – never ending Sound –
Knowing the Life around –
Be careful – sweet –
Don’t let it – Drown

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DaughterofEvil said...
Mar. 15, 2011 at 10:32 pm
That poor child....I feel so sorry for them. Anyways, so few words yet such a powerful image. It reminded me of my elementary school days.....5/5
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Mar. 17, 2011 at 7:51 pm
That was exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this piece. My Creative Writing teacher also liked it.
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