Need You

February 1, 2011
By BrittBritt95 PLATINUM, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
BrittBritt95 PLATINUM, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
21 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is not a passion, it is a never ending dream


As I sit here and I write this,
the rain falls, the lightning strikes
and the thunder crashes.
The rain falls
like the tears coming
from my eyes,
lightning strikes and
thunder crashes.
Baby you don't
understand how
much I miss you.
How much I love you
and how much that
I need you here now.
To have your arms
wrapped around me
holding me close to you.
Baby just know that
I love you.
As I sit here and I write this,
the rain falls, the lightning strikes
and the thunder crashes.



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on Feb. 23 2011 at 7:32 pm
:) ur welcome :)

on Feb. 23 2011 at 4:19 pm
BrittBritt95 PLATINUM, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
21 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is not a passion, it is a never ending dream

yeah its kool if u leave it at the fact that you think its amazing lol. thank you so much

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2011 at 8:55 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

!!!!!!! You are an awesome writer. I can visualize the poem, and......how about I just say amazing, and leave it at that? :D

on Feb. 22 2011 at 5:42 pm
BrittBritt95 PLATINUM, Harrisburg, Pennsylvania
21 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is not a passion, it is a never ending dream

thank you so much. that means a lot to me

on Feb. 22 2011 at 5:40 pm
FallingAlways GOLD, Franklin, Wisconsin
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The worst mistake anyone can make is being too afraid to make one." -anonymous.

You're an amazing writer, and I love this poem. :) :)

on Feb. 22 2011 at 10:26 am
LilGirlBadd17 PLATINUM, Saluda, South Carolina
20 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life To Short To Live With Reqrets"

I like this poem, this reminds me of my love letter. sometimes missing him or her is the onl thing me can do

Angel_17 said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 12:05 am
Angel_17, Tucson, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 17 comments
This reminds me so much of my poem The Rain Will Never Fall. I know exactly where you're coming from. Keep writing<3


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