Need You

February 1, 2011
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As I sit here and I write this,
the rain falls, the lightning strikes
and the thunder crashes.
The rain falls
like the tears coming
from my eyes,
lightning strikes and
thunder crashes.
Baby you don't
understand how
much I miss you.
How much I love you
and how much that
I need you here now.
To have your arms
wrapped around me
holding me close to you.
Baby just know that
I love you.
As I sit here and I write this,
the rain falls, the lightning strikes
and the thunder crashes.





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Katniss1213 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 8:55 am
!!!!!!! You are an awesome writer. I can visualize the poem, and......how about I just say amazing, and leave it at that? :D
 
BrittBritt95 replied...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 4:19 pm
yeah its kool if u leave it at the fact that you think its amazing lol. thank you so much
 
FallingAlways said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 5:40 pm
You're an amazing writer, and I love this poem. :) :)
 
BrittBritt95 replied...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 5:42 pm
thank you so much. that means a lot to me
 
FallingAlways replied...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 7:32 pm
:) ur welcome :)
 
Angel_17 said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 12:05 am
This reminds me so much of my poem The Rain Will Never Fall. I know exactly where you're coming from. Keep writing<3
 
LilGirlBadd17 replied...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 10:26 am
I like this poem, this reminds me of my love letter. sometimes missing him or her is the onl thing me can do
 
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