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Pull me,
Pull me through this obstacle course.
I’ll clutch the sides,
You’ll fold your fingers into the handle.
I’ll feel my heart rise,
Like a bird chirping in the morning,
Like the laughter of a newborn,
Like a family being together.
Don’t groan,
Don’t groan at how heavy I am,
Or at how the handle is giving you blisters.
Just smile,
Smile at the togetherness,
At the juvenile fun that we can still have.
We’ll rumble through,
My pony-tail bouncing, hitting my neck,
Up and down.
Plants will hit my face,
You will step on rocks,
We’ll barrel on, and when we get tired,
We’ll sit on a stump and
Drink juice boxes,
Smiling.
And I’ll feel my heart rise,
Like lying out in the sun on a summer day,
Like waking up on Christmas morning,
Like being with you.



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A_shy_dove said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 5:31 am:
I cannot help but give you five stars... :-) 
 
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Solnyshko This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 31, 2011 at 2:32 pm:
Your use of parallels is very good. I like the mood of the poem, and how consistant it is. Good Job :)
 
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sallysusan said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 4:25 pm:
did it win??
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 4:25 pm :
actually yes, it did!!
 
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