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The Mystery of the night….

January 29, 2011
By anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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I look up at the sky..
There was the moon shining down upon me..
No one understands the pain..
The intensive color of Blood
Flowing down your chest....

The night is what brings us close..
It is what we chose..
You looked in my eyes..
I pulled your hair from your face and said..
“I love you.”

The night brings pain..suffering..and death
The night brings beauty and love..
What should we believe?
Nothing else matters..You are the one……
Without you life means nothing...

© Alyssa R., Pacific Grove, CA

The author's comments:
Inspiration from this piece came from all those suspenseful horror movies that i watch. I made my own story through poetry. I do not know why but this piece does mean a lot to me.
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anisanasir_11 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 5:52 pm
anisanasir_11 PLATINUM, Orlando, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream. -Edgar Allan Poe
~"Paper is more patient than people,"~Anne Frank
"Inspiration from the heart is written in the dark."~Anisa Nasir

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Thanks soo muchhh :D 

lilmartz i am about to go read some of your stuff tooo :D

lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 5:27 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Ooooh this is spooky! It's really eerie and from after reading this and your comment about the article, you definitely captured the right mood and theme. I read through this twice and the second time I was able to find so much more meaning and really see how you shaped this poem together. I like this! Good job :)