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Because I don't know what to think
and my chest is caving in around my
barely beating heart,
just to give it protection from You.
I'm gasping for air and screaming
out to you. Wait. Wait. Wait.
And I can't do this, not again.
A simple conversation and I'm
falling apart as my world
is turned upside down. I
just need answers, and I just
need truth and I just need you.
I always have.





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sunrise_faerie said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:55 pm
I love this poem so much :)
 
laaauren This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 2:12 pm
Thank you (:
 
Smickles This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 2:43 pm
I think it's sweet and charming :) what i love about this is that it's simple, and i LOVE your style
 
laaauren This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 2:11 pm
Thank you, very much. (:
 
sunnynerd said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 10:41 pm

I have to say that you used your words well, and if this poem of your is not published anytime soon, you should know that it has sunk into my heart, its amazing.

Words should be said but for some reason, theyre always unsaid, and we all need somebody to love

Great job!

 
laaauren This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 8:39 am
That really means a lot, thank you so much. (:
 
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