Needing

February 4, 2011
By laaauren PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
laaauren PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is."


Because I don't know what to think
and my chest is caving in around my
barely beating heart,
just to give it protection from You.
I'm gasping for air and screaming
out to you. Wait. Wait. Wait.
And I can't do this, not again.
A simple conversation and I'm
falling apart as my world
is turned upside down. I
just need answers, and I just
need truth and I just need you.
I always have.



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on Feb. 20 2011 at 2:12 pm
laaauren PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is."

Thank you (:

on Feb. 20 2011 at 2:11 pm
laaauren PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is."

Thank you, very much. (:

on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:55 pm
sunrise_faerie GOLD, Fredericksburg, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
things are only as dark as you make them.
there is always beauty in every situation. look for it and you will see.
smile; sometimes it's all that will keep you from crying.

I love this poem so much :)

on Feb. 16 2011 at 2:43 pm
Smickles PLATINUM, Buffalo Grove, Illinois
43 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is a reason that the people from your past did not make it to your future

:P

I think it's sweet and charming :) what i love about this is that it's simple, and i LOVE your style

on Feb. 16 2011 at 8:39 am
laaauren PLATINUM, Cincinnati, Ohio
21 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's just that...I just think that some things are meant to be broken. Imperfect. Chaotic. It's the universe's way of providing contrast, you know? There have to be a few holes in the road. It's how life is."

That really means a lot, thank you so much. (:

on Feb. 15 2011 at 10:41 pm
MargaritaAlely BRONZE, Emporia, Kansas
2 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
" So whoever you are and whover Iam, you made it alright to be me"

I have to say that you used your words well, and if this poem of your is not published anytime soon, you should know that it has sunk into my heart, its amazing.

Words should be said but for some reason, theyre always unsaid, and we all need somebody to love

Great job!





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