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S.O.S

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S.O.S
Forgotten
Unaided
Deserted
Water logged wood
Sharks circling
Waves splashing
Swaying leaves
Grainy sand
Wrecked boat
Palm trees
Drift wood
Stranded
Left
Abandoned
S.O.S!





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Kaitbryn said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 12:24 am
I really like this!! I see it at two different levels...the obvious, deserted island scene, VERY godd discriptions!!!, or the emotional, side....I LOVE it!!!
 
D.B.Kinkers replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 5:46 pm
Thanks! I felt like I was trying to get at something but I don't really know what that something is.
 
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