Forever Girl

January 9, 2011
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Thats when he said; ‘forever girl’
I smiled one last time
They told me to run as fast as I could
The denial became a blur
Along with the tears
I should have listened to them
I wish I had, I wish I would

The thing about endings
They’re really beginnings
I wish I’d known that from the start
Before I submitted to lending
My heart out again, and again
A new beginning was deserved
I reassured my broken heart

Thats when he said forever girl
Always for you dear

She believed him

He lied

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lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 3:38 pm
I like the way you wrote this! It had a very nice flow to it. Definitely one of the best 2 AM poems I've read. Nice work :)
Live.Life.Fast replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 7:52 pm
awee thank you so much! =) 
forevergirl8080 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 8:51 am
 i really like this poem... :)
beautifulgirl557 replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 1:18 pm
i think the word choice of this poem is good. i really love that you quoted the words most guys would use toward a girl. keep on writing.
Live.Life.Fast replied...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 7:52 pm
Thank you =) yah how many times has that been said to a girl haha
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