Loveless

For such a tragic topic, you wrote this very well. I really feel sad now. This poem makes me wonder, even though she never said "I love you" herself, had anyone ever said those words to her? I'd like to think she has heard it before. This poem is like my worst nightmare of ending up alone brought into perspective since I don't believe in love and all. For such a short poem, so much was able to come out of it, look how long my comment is! Anyways, great job! This is really good :)

This is great! So saddd... But I love it! Good job! :)