Loveless

January 9, 2011
By henlady GOLD, Oakland, California
henlady GOLD, Oakland, California
13 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The most wasted day of all is that on which you have not laughed.


I love you
Three words
Never uttered
To one soul
She stood
70 years of wrinkles apparent on her face
Alone
Always has been
Always will be
Loveless



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on Feb. 10 2011 at 3:49 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

For such a tragic topic, you wrote this very well. I really feel sad now. This poem makes me wonder, even though she never said "I love you" herself, had anyone ever said those words to her? I'd like to think she has heard it before. This poem is like my worst nightmare of ending up alone brought into perspective since I don't believe in love and all. For such a short poem, so much was able to come out of it, look how long my comment is! Anyways, great job! This is really good :)

on Feb. 10 2011 at 8:34 am
CassidyMarturana BRONZE, Califon, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about just waiting out the storm. It's about learning to dance in the rain."

This is great! So saddd... But I love it! Good job! :)


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