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I’m fine,
But I’m not.

I’ll be ok,
But I won’t.

I’m not hurt,
But I am.

I forgive you,
But I don’t.

It’s no big deal,
But it is.

I don’t care,
But I do.

It’s alright,
But it isn’t.

I love you,
But I’m not so sure now.





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Volleystar15 said...
Feb. 14, 2011 at 8:31 pm
i love this poem!!! it is so cute!! well sad but so true i feel the same way!!
 
Vidra This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 3:03 pm
I'm glad you can relate. :) thanks for commenting!
 
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 3:26 am
I really like this poem. I want to know more though. I want to know what happened to change the person's mind. The last two lines were seemed like such a cliffhanger! There's so much more I want to know and I don't really think this poem is complete. However, I do think this is a great start. Keep Writing :)
 
Vidra This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 11:47 am
I understand what you mean by not knowing the whole story, I didn't really make that clear in the poem enough. I might try to revise this one, just because I also feel it's a little unfinshed. I also tried to write it with a little mystery because my feeling were confused. Thanks for the advice though! :)
 
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