I'm Fine, But I'm Not

December 18, 2010
By Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath


I’m fine,
But I’m not.

I’ll be ok,
But I won’t.

I’m not hurt,
But I am.

I forgive you,
But I don’t.

It’s no big deal,
But it is.

I don’t care,
But I do.

It’s alright,
But it isn’t.

I love you,
But I’m not so sure now.



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Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 11:47 am
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

I understand what you mean by not knowing the whole story, I didn't really make that clear in the poem enough. I might try to revise this one, just because I also feel it's a little unfinshed. I also tried to write it with a little mystery because my feeling were confused. Thanks for the advice though! :)

on Feb. 20 2011 at 3:26 am
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
40 articles 5 photos 163 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

I really like this poem. I want to know more though. I want to know what happened to change the person's mind. The last two lines were seemed like such a cliffhanger! There's so much more I want to know and I don't really think this poem is complete. However, I do think this is a great start. Keep Writing :)

Vidra PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2011 at 3:03 pm
Vidra PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
46 articles 17 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I write only because
There is a voice within me
That will not be still.”
-Sylvia Plath

I'm glad you can relate. :) thanks for commenting!

on Feb. 14 2011 at 8:31 pm
Volleystar15 GOLD, Wauconda, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You asked me what was wrong, i smiled and said NOTHING.
Then i turned around and whispered EVERYTHING."

"When i see you smile and know that is not for me, that is when i miss you the most."

i love this poem!!! it is so cute!! well sad but so true i feel the same way!!


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