mistakes (i'm sorry)

January 19, 2011
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire


i know i hurt you
i know it wasn't fair
i know you probably
hate me
but i made a mistake
and i'm sorry.
your not there
anymore
and i am
wishing you are
i miss you.
i'm sorry...



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on May. 27 2011 at 6:38 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

that's because it's not about the part where i had to break laws and the back ground info about santa

on May. 27 2011 at 5:45 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

and no one coulld've possibly inferred all that just by reading your poem alone.

on May. 26 2011 at 11:03 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

I SHOULD"VE GONE DOWN THE CHIMANEY!!!

it would've been way less painful.......... *sigh* but it wouldn't have been as fun

no unfortunatly :( i forgot to install them there (it's really sad,i was trying to prevent creepy stalkers from entering and stealing all my cookies)

 


on May. 26 2011 at 8:39 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

maybe they slammed your door in your face and broke your window. what about the chimney, got any retina scanners in there?

on May. 25 2011 at 5:27 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

yeah but, if it's my house, i could just have it scan my retnas

on May. 25 2011 at 4:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

to continue the conversation

on May. 24 2011 at 3:13 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

if it's my house why'd i have to break in through a window? btw, broken glass hurts....

on May. 24 2011 at 2:41 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

oh, well in that case i guess at least half of your poem is missing, since there was no visible door slam-ment to hinder the conversation.nice to hear you have an invisible house though, I'm happy for you.

on May. 24 2011 at 11:48 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

yeah..... i really really  hate those invisible doors being slammed in my face..... especially when they're soundproof but it's okay, cuz i broke in throught the invisible window (it's kinda just a really invisible house)

on May. 23 2011 at 7:21 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

looking over it again, i guess i mant the conversation. like, i dont know. maybe the door got slammed in your face or something.

on May. 23 2011 at 8:45 am
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

in that case, then yes, it was over.

 

well kind of.... it's not like we're dead  yet or anything....


on May. 22 2011 at 6:17 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

de rien captain. and by not over i mean...well...anything that wasnt over.

on May. 22 2011 at 5:18 pm
trapped-in-a-broken-wonderland PLATINUM, Houston, Texas
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love in it'a essence is just spiritual fire

yes there was more to say to that particular person.... and it all depends on what your deffinition of "not over" is......

 

merci pour les commentaires! je vous en remercie!


on May. 21 2011 at 6:52 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

it is that i amliking this one. i like the sense of emotion and the last line and how it has those elipsis things. its like you had more to say cause this wasnt over. its not over is it cptain? 5 stars.


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